In His Most Exalted Name
By the will of God, the Exalted, may you be successful and assisted. I did not have enough time to carefully read your entire thesis. However, I studied some of the cases. I hoped that, by the will of God, the Exalted, you will gradually write better and more carefully, and thus preserving the entire prestige of the discussions. At the time of writing, whenever something is attributed to somebody, refer to his book.
You attributed something to the late Sayyid, «1» may God have mercy on him, whose authenticity is uncertain, and this is not correct. Apparently, you have attributed an issue raised by the late Aqa Shaykh Muhammad Husayn Isfahani to the late Aqa Na'ini! There are also similar issues in the principal note of the subject; God willing, they will be eliminated gradually. Your criticism is acknowledged, although it is unjustifiable. At any rate, your efforts and service to the subject is worthy of acknowledgement. Be careful of your lesson note; write more neatly and give a bigger margin for it. Leave more spaces between lines. Write the words more clearly and do not let water spill on the pages. May you will be successful, by the will of God, the Exalted. May peace be upon you.